Not one to usually nitpick punctuation, but that first bubble really needs a comma.
I shall refrain from making juvenile jokes about said rabbit grabbing his scaly floozie
I totally get what you mean ColdFusion. I didn’t even notice it till you pointed it out. I should go back and move the dialogue around so the comma doesn’t just sit at the end.
>I shall refrain from making juvenile jokes about said rabbit grabbing his scaly floozie
Man, that last panel is pretty atmospheric.
Thank you Bazza.
You’d think vultures, of all people, would check to make sure their enemies are really dead…
You gotta send a group of professionals to get the job done for big Owl boss man. These guys don’t think with their stomachs…
Or at least have no problems doing…”stuff” to the corpse. Let’s face it: if anybody would, it’d be a vulture.
Not one to usually nitpick punctuation, but that first bubble really needs a comma.
I shall refrain from making juvenile jokes about said rabbit grabbing his scaly floozie
I totally get what you mean ColdFusion. I didn’t even notice it till you pointed it out. I should go back and move the dialogue around so the comma doesn’t just sit at the end.
>I shall refrain from making juvenile jokes about said rabbit grabbing his scaly floozie
L-lewd!