Ulp. Bad guy is making all the usual bad guy mistakes! If you want something done correctly, do it yourself! And never turn your back on the hero. And also flunky is holding the gun a little too close to the hero.
Jasper may get between the henchbird and his boss, and that could result in the end of that particular employment arrangement in several ways. Jasper IS a rabbit, you know.
I like how your interchangeable henchmen have names, and gang members carry personal grudges for each baddie that the heroes carve through. Makes them more human. The bit at the mansion, where they’re smoking cigars and so on: good little moment to remember these assholes are people. It prevents the reader from being an asshole because they’re not dehumanized, and it gives them responsibility for their sins since they’re not written like organic automata.
Gotta be kinda frustrating when the guy you’re trying to menace is just ignoring you.
I like the screen tones (I think that’s the name?). They give it a bit of a pulp feel.
Ulp. Bad guy is making all the usual bad guy mistakes! If you want something done correctly, do it yourself! And never turn your back on the hero. And also flunky is holding the gun a little too close to the hero.
When you have to shoot, shoot, don’t talk!
Jasper may get between the henchbird and his boss, and that could result in the end of that particular employment arrangement in several ways. Jasper IS a rabbit, you know.
Jump him, Jasper. Jump him!! I mean that to be very bunny.
I like how your interchangeable henchmen have names, and gang members carry personal grudges for each baddie that the heroes carve through. Makes them more human. The bit at the mansion, where they’re smoking cigars and so on: good little moment to remember these assholes are people. It prevents the reader from being an asshole because they’re not dehumanized, and it gives them responsibility for their sins since they’re not written like organic automata.